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In my dreams time rewinds
not far, but far enough
where everything in reality now
could be a different reality
one where i had courage in time
where everything would be different

but for now wishes will
remain as just wishes and
maybe at another time and place
dreams will come true

a dreamer that dreams
will be just fine for maybe
it is it the dreamers in life
who are stronger at heart
yet also have the most fear

despite being able to reach
for the yellow moon or
the twinkling white stars
i remained placid until
it was much too late

for fear is an entrapment
with more courage required
to be made for each subtle chance
each subtle glance at the
mysterious future which
so fervently lies ahead

in a time not far from now
things have the chance
to become that what we
wish for, what we long for

in another time and place
if things like fate and
serendipity really do exist
then we will happen

but for me at least
i hope we get the chance
before you go trying
to catch your own stars
and i not long after
go chasing after mine

but even if it takes
an entire lifetime, one
day i know, we'll
wish upon the same
twinkling star
and dreams will come true
©2008-2010 ~prettyinpink03
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Author's Comments

I speak better in poetic terms than real words, always have.

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:iconelixirphoenix:
Very sweet:)
This based on something that is actually happening to you?
If so, the best of luck for you two:)

--
"If the whole world had stood between us, we must have met; if we had been born in different ages, we could not have been sundered!"
-Nathaniel Hawthorne to Sophia, his wife

Quoth the raven, "Nevermore."
-from "The Raven" by Edgar Allan Poe
:iconprettyinpink03:
Thank you. Yes, it is something really happening to me. And thanks, I think we need it more than I first thought. :(

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:iconscarlett-o-hara:
i wish i could write like u!

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"As God as my witness, I'll never go hungry again!" -Scarlett O'Hara
:iconprettyinpink03:
Thank you, but I never thought I was that good. And keep in mind, I've been writing alot longer than you have. It takes time and practice. My first stuff was absolutely horrible. Here's a glimpse at some of it... [link] Thats stuff from about 9th grade through the end of 10th. That right there is even after 3 years of writing. Don't give up on it, anything actually if its something you love. Break down walls, make a scene, scream, fight, if thats what you need to do to do something you love.

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:iconscarlett-o-hara:
yea i keep practicing hopefully it will pay off...haha

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"As God as my witness, I'll never go hungry again!" -Scarlett O'Hara
:iconprettyinpink03:
It will, just be patient.

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:iconscarlett-o-hara:
i no...

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"As God as my witness, I'll never go hungry again!" -Scarlett O'Hara
:iconshadowfalcon89:
"I speak better in poetic terms than real words, always have."

as do i. both a blessing and a curse, i suppose.

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never say goodbye. because goodbye means going away, and going away means forgetting--peter pan.
:iconprettyinpink03:
yep, both a blessing and a curse, ill agree with that

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